WITH U FOR ETERNITY
Its neither a loss nor an achievementalways seem you are there despite being non existent
A new dawn appears with your presence
and the sun sets because of the dearth of your essence
You are a fragment of every breath I inhale
life corresponds to this process without fail
Eyes glaring at each other,palms onto one another a part of my own self I think I am no longer
I can sense your words swirling in my mindthe promises you never fulfilled I have left them all behind
Why couldn't I avert bestowing myself completely to you may be for me it was the most unbiased thing to do
You are an indispensable part of every that way
which receives the sun's first rays to begin my day
Neither would derogate,nor would annihilate
bonds attached with you cannot be even ruined by fate
Every moment,every second you remain in my heart
despite your physical presence being miles apart
An earnest request I would like to make
in all your pains and sufferings can I hold a stake
Would be intolerable to see tears strolling down your face
because your relation with agony is not justified in any case
Still not clear why this heart chose you to be the one
probably after it decided to have a self introspection
The first glimpse of your pretty face
prompted an inner voice to say "you are the one life shall embrace"
Acquiring a place in your heart would be my prime goal
and I wish the same emerges from within your soul
So in the end my ultimate wish shall be
that I could be yours and you could be mine for eternity _____________________________________________________________________
8 comments:
Guud One..!!
Simply superb. Hats off 2 u man. Hamare chote navaab itne uchh vicharon ke hain ye to hamein maloom hi nahi tha.. Awsome..
Nice work ! Just a small suggestion .. to be taken as a serious poet, try to avoid using the SMS lingo .. rock on !!
great poem man.....! absolutely great work...keep it.....waiting for ur poem book to get published....
great work boss.
hope u gt dat girl in lyf 4 whom u wrote dis beautiful poem..
Awesomeness
Awesomeness
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